Destiny: Black Storm

Destiny: Black Call

By Patrick

This story is a fan made story based off first shooter game Destiny, including the Photos.

Please read Until the end for the dialog about this story and updates for future plans my this story. Until then, happy reading ; )

The Prologue

‘Alright Here we go…..again’

‘A long, long time ago, when the earth was perfect, apart from people making foolish decisions for global warning and climate change stuff. A being of light from the far reaches of spaces came to our solar system gives us the ability to live long and terraformed Mars, Venus, dwarf planets and moons became worlds that we can live and breathe on. This being, is what everyone calls the Traveler.’

‘That’s the big giant Snowball in the sky’

Ha-ha Yes, my dear boy, people said it was a time of miracles the golden ages were. Everyone prayed at it like it was their God and with-it humanity advents our civilization across the solar system. It was a peaceful time, until the day the great god forsaken us. As we were about to advents across the stars, an ancient dark enemy that hunting the Traveler came to are system killing anything in sight. That’s what we all call the darkness’

‘What was the darkness?’

‘No one knows, all we know about this Darkness is a dangerous entire that wanted to wipe us out off to extinction. Just when all hope was lost the Traveler specified itself to Defeat this darkness and everyone believe it saved humanity, Bloody fools. In the Traveler’s dying breath, it created the Ghosts to continued to help Humanity.’

‘The Ghost?’

‘The Ghost are the small one eye little bot things that flies around the solar system, looking for someone whose been died for a really long time.’

‘What’s the point in that?’

‘Because that’s their Destiny to, to find their chosen by the Traveler and when they do, they can bring them back from the dead with all their skin and organs back and they are known as Guardians. But they will have no memories of their old life they had before, but most people say it for the best that they don’t know their past. But the Guardians are Powerful and almost Immortal Warrior that wielding the powerful weapon which they all call The Light, which is a gift from the Traveler and a Tool to face against the darkness.’

‘Immortal?’

‘Once the Ghost finds it guardian and if a Guardian die again, their ghost can resurrect and heal them back to life, but they can only do it with their chosen Guardian. So long the Guardians Light is still sparking bright inside them and their ghost are always by their side they will continued to light away through the darkness and to defend humanity from the dark focuses that the Traveler and The Darkness brought with is.’

‘From the reckless Space Pirates, the Fallen (They trueful called Eliksni), the Plant destroying Empire Legions, Cabal to the Infested Worm Gods the Hive and Timeless War machines called the Vex.’

‘Humanity worth ship these great called heroes and look at them and the Traveler as their great saviours of the light. They said that they were all brought back to life because they are the Traveler chosen and be told three oath’s that the ghost and the Guardian. One, that they will always protect and lend a hand to those need on help. The other, is that they don’t go to looking into the Guardians pass lives, so they won’t feeling any grief or despair and Final, they are not a to betray another Guardian’s and Ghost’s, included themselves.’

‘But most of it is just a lie’s, to keep us safe’

‘Dad?’

‘Yes son?’

‘Why don’t you like Guardians?’

Chapter One

Felax Starborn

Hovering over the plant Mars and inside a Cabal Legion Battleship, the ship was being attack by the Fallen from House Winters trying to raid their arsenals and glimmer the Cabal have lying around. Space Weapons were being fired, Lasers and Bullets flying everywhere in different directions and bodies blown into from one side of the fight to the other. In the middle of this fire fight a young, not to Ok Guardian Hunter wearing a dark red no sleeves Jacket, a leather hosteler belt around his waist, abit of armour on his legs and wrist starting to rust up and a Damage and patched up dark grey hooded coat with a red Dingo head symbol printed on it on his back. He wields nothing but a hand cannon in his hands, covering himself inside a small boxed up janitor closet and no way out to escape with his Ghost complain beside him. And his name is-

(Big explosions came very close to the room there in)

“For F### sake Felax” Shouted The Guardians Ghost scanning around the room for a way out “Could you please keep it under control over there please!!!!!”

“Of shut your speaker Arc!!!, I’m doing the best I can” Shouted Felax trying to stay focuses of the battlefield.

“Well do harder!!!”

“Hrr… f### me Dead, how did we get into this situation”

“Maybe if you just walk out of the job, instead of doing it Solo! On F##### Cabal Battleship with only a Hand cannon to kill a single Cabal Captain!” Arc shouting a lot louder “Then maybe we would of never end up dead in a Janitor CLOSET!!!”

“Oh Shut up” snapped Felax, reloading his weapon while making a bunch of points in Arcs…… whatever she has for a face. “First off! I didn’t have a choice, if we turned back empty hand, we wouldn’t get the Glimmer to pay the debt that we own to Dead Orbit and wouldn’t let us be 500 miles near the city. Second off I had the situation even after we killed the captain, until the Fallen shown up raid the place and F### are escape plan. And Final the rest was your Fault!” Finished reloading and starts shooting again.

“My FAULT!!!” Arc looked at him mad

“You were the one who got us into this mess after you smashed one of Dead Orbit cargo ships by shooting a missile at it.” Said Felax moving in and out of cover, trying to get a clear shot when he gets the changes.

“Ok first off, it prenotice destroyed” smart-ass corrected Arc “And second off it was an accident! how was I supposed to know by only taping the missile would set the rocket to go off.”

“By not entering the place marked Highly Explosive Area!!!” Shouted Felax turning his head, facing straight with a frustration look at Arc, while moving aside from the shooting. “And to top it all off, you’re the one who got us in here after you readied the f##### map from the terminal console wrong!

“I read it wrong because it was in Cabal or Psion language’s, how was I supposed to read it!”

“What?!” Shouted Felax looking straight at him Arc with frustration on his faces “You’re telling me that you are an Living AI created by the Traveler thousand Plus years ago and you telling me now that you can’t translate an Aliens Computer!!!”

Arc Paused for a moment as she realises his big mouth messed him up so badly, because he was trying to hide the fact that he was hiding the fact that it is his fault that they are ending up in the Janitor closeted and was lying to Felax about it.

“Well, if you put it that way – “

“Oh my…. ARRRRRRRR!!!!” Screamed Felax who was putting his hands on his face, including holding the gun in his hand and was about to have a total melt down. “Why do you keep- (*Bang*)

Gun shot and explosive rounds that are blazing red, were round were blazing through the room that Felax and Arc were in. Felax moved feather back from firing shots to the edge of the Janitor closeted.

“Oh, this da-…look, let’s save the argument after we get out of this place!” Said Arc quickly hovering towards Felax left shoulder, as Felax was frustrated with Arc and everything that going on around him, as he closed his Eyes and count to ten.

“….Eight…. Nine…. Ten…. *Deep Breath*…. Alright genius, what’s the plan on getting out of this and you better not be bulls###ing this time.” Said Felax with a less moody tone, his free hand was foamed of a fist with a lot of Anger in it.

“No more bulls###s promise. Now while I was scanning the room and I found behind the shelve at the wall at the end of the room, is a small vent there.” Said Arc pointing a flashlight from her eye at the bottom of the shelve which was filled with pumping pipes and other Cabal cleaning stuff. Felax quickly moved to the shelve after the two enemy forces final focus on themselves, thrown the sleeve to the ground as quickly as possible and see the vent that is just enough size to jump through, with a silver’s shine seal that blocking their way in. Then all the sudden a big, massive explosion just blown up what left of the doorway.

“Oh crap were running out of time, ummm… right so all we need to is find something to take out these screw with a-“

Felax shots his gun at the seal with one shot at each corner and kicked it down with supreme forced.

“Or you could be a smart-ass and do that”

“Err…. Come on Drongo” said Felax as he takes a set back and getting ready to jump in the vent, without looking inside it.

“No wait we should befo-“

Felax grabs Arc, after he put his gun in his holster and without a second thought he vaulted through the vent hole hatch which turned out to be a very long dark dropped, after bullets flied through behind them.

“Arrrrrrrr……id-oit!!!!!” Arc was screaming like a kid on a very dangers ride for the first time.

“Shut up! And turn your flashlight BACK ON!!!” Roared Felax

Arc turned her flashlight back on and the moment she turned the light back on, they about to hit through a fan that will chop them into a number that higher than one, that’s for sure.

“Oh Sh-”

As Felax Jump sideways in mid-air, as a light flashed coming from his feet and crash through another vent door, holding Arc really tie in his chest. Felax rolled over a crossed the floor, slammed his left arm against a wall next and breaking his arm in the process, with a bad crack.

“Hey idiot” said Arc as hover off Felax’s chest. “Are you okay?”

“Errrr…. Oh yeah, I’m fine it’s not like I nearly got chopped to a million pieces, double jump into a vent screen, rolling hard a crossed and breaking my arm in the process.” Sarcastically Felax in so much pain and having a headache that made his eye vision blurred. He puts his only fictional hand on his head trying to get his vision back, while Arc heals his broken arm with a bright light shining a pond Felax.

“Well next time you should look before you randomly-“

“Oh, shut up! let’s not forget that you were the one who got us here in the first place” Said Felax having a pissed of look in his muddy-bloody face at Arc.

“You-….hrrrr… I’m sorry for lying to you about getting us cornered. The consoled said it wasn’t operational and couldn’t get it to work for me” said Arc apologizing to Felax as she just finished fixing and healing his body and the light rift stop shine a pond him.

“Oh, so now you’re lying about not knowing how to translate Cabal Language which you said a few MINUTES AGO!!!!” as Felax quickly stood up off the ground and look straight at Arc with more rage in his eyes.

“Felax that not-“

“SHUT UP!!!” Shouted Felax point at her aggressively, pointing a finger at her. “Until we get off this ship, I don’t wanna hear another lying word out of you and when this is all over, I going to have serious talk about your behaviour lately mate.”

“But Felax-“

“Mute!”

“Felax we need to-“

“I Said mute-“

‘Cranked’ went the steel door open not that far from them and on the other side of it were a bunch of strong Cabal soldier’s strong army green and grey (Like their armour) shield that could survive a blasted carrying and heavy weaponry pointed at Felax.

“Oh F###” said both Felax and Arc as Arc disappears into Felax (Don’t ask why it just works), while Felax dodge into cover, from heavy fire and missiles.

“Crikey this day just never ends” as Felax gun got jammed going Clicked…. Clicked “Oh for Travelers sack!”

Felax quickly ducked down to cover to fix this gun, while the Cabal forces were constantly firing at him and get closer to Felax, and he knows it.

“Well, Felax it been one hell of an honour being a part of your legend” said Arc in Felax head, saying goodbye to him.

“Shut it! It not over until the music stops!” Said Felax put his Jammed gun back into his Holster and raised his right hand out, forming a fisted. “And I’m no Legend. I’M THE HERO!”

Then all the sudden an electric glowing knife appeared in his clutches, as the same blue glowing Arc energy was flowing all over Felax’s body like his own body was just harnessing a lightening. Felax jumps super fasted like a lightning bolt, up on to the sealing and lang at his enemies with his deadly light bladed. He’d cut through one enemy after the other going so fast like thunder itself and the Cabal tried to shot Felax down by blasting everywhere, but couldn’t get a shot into him or do anything against him except to hope that their not the being cut into piece by his blade by the gods.

“Yippie-Yi-Yea!!!” Shouted Felax going around Cutting, jumping around the places and having the time of one of this many lives. “Is this the best you Spaces Rhino Go-”

Then all the sudden a huge explosion came out through the room like a supernova, pushing back Felax against the metal wall with supreme force and the remaining enemy into spaces. Just before the blasted could got any feather, the air pressure and the blast was intently sucked into spaces and pulling Felax along with it. Felax got hit multiple objects, dead enemies and destroy walls and platforms that he flew into, as Felax was struggling to grab hold onto something, but he was flying into spaces quicker than his hands could grab anything and Felax was spinning like a cartwheel going done a big hill, making him have one big headache and sick. Before Felax was blowed into space thinking that his is where this life was going to end, he got stab in the foot by a bended clip on the big dark grey holes pipe that is wrapped onto remain pole bars left on the unbalanced Catwalk.

“Arrrrr!!!” Felax screaming in pain “Why is it always the left FOOT!!!”

“Who cares, just Hold on!!!” Arc in his head.

Felax bends down, grabbing hold onto a solid pole that is still secured to hold his weight and holds onto it with all, with the piece of metal still stuck on his foot. Felax looked around and saw the left-over massive hole that, that explosion created. It was at the back of the Warship where most of the thruster and engines were. It was like a giant beast taking a big bit of the ship and leave the remains to be consumed by blazing flames that were rising higher every few seconds.

“Arc, call our ship and lets get the F### out of here before something else happens!!!” shouted Felax after he reach what’s lets of the Catwalk and pulled out the piece of metal out of his foot while hold himself onto a pole with his right arm and leg rapid around it.

“I can’t, the Warship just enter Mars atmosphere”

“ARE YOU KIDDING ME MATE!!!!”

Then all the sudden there is a mass of fire pasting by the ship like something you see when a commit comes crashing down onto the plant except the fall ship was the commit and on it final course to Mars.

“Oh FOR!!!…. how could this day get any-”

Then suddenly a big piece reaped off the ship, crashed into what Felax used to hold on from being pull from space and pushed him backwards into what’s left of an elevator wall and gets hit in the head, knocking Felax out instantly.

*

“Daring” said an soft unknown Voice “It’s time to get up”

“Come on!” The voice starting to fade away “There work need to be done”

“Wake up lazy brat!!!” Shouted Arc.

Felax woke up with a shocked lack of oxygen in his lungs, while Arc was hovering above him with her flashlight eye on. Felax quickly got up, banged his head against the left side of the elevator which is on it side. Felax instantly saw and lung to the elevator door (which was sideways, knee to the ground and getting the hatch open with his hunting knife. The second Felax open the door he climbed out of the un-functioning elevator, rounded down a small hill of red sand and took off his helmet to get some air in his lungs. Felax’s short-long dark brown hair is scruffy, muddy and hasn’t been washed in almost a month. His has a Pale ivory skin, also have two different colour eyes, left side is bright topaz and the other eye is limestone green.

“Hhrrrmmmmmaaaaaarrrrrggggaate” Moan Felax having his hands on his face and having the biggest headache and rolling himself in the sand.

“You, ok?” said Arc, not caring about his headache and pain his in.

“Hrrrr…. I’m fine, I’m fine.” Said Felax getting up on his feet and dusting off all the red sand off him and knows that he has landed on mars. “What’s the states we are in in?”

“Oh I’m fine to thanks for asking” Bitching Arc, shoving her shell into Felax. “And to answer your question, see for yourself.”

Felax faced the way that Arc was looking and saw miles away the Cabal Warship crashed into what’s left of an old small city that been abandon and left to be buried in sand after the collapse. Now its all burning to the ground and the flames raising up like hell consuming it to the underworld, as smock ascends to the sky darkening like a huge storm is brewing.

“Hrrrr…. hell, I’m not going to hear the end of this any time soon”

To be continued in Chapter 2

Hey mates, Thanks for spending your time reading my first chapter of my Destiny Fan Fiction Destiny Black Strom and I hope you reader enjoyed it. Now you all are probably wondering way I only put up one chapter instead of a full story, what’s this story going to be about and what’s my future plans for my blog. Well maybe not the last one but you all get the idea.

  • First off I only send my first chapter of Destiny Black Strom was because I haven’t gotten written it down yet, cause of thing call…… everyday life. Now I’m going to be working on working on getting chapter 2 up here, but I’m only going to work on it a bit because I want to put different story on my blog and you all would probably start nagging at me of reading the same topic, “Do something else!!”. So when I get the spare time I continued writing Destiny Black Strom, until then lets talk about what’s the story of Destiny Black Strom about.
  • Destiny Black Strom is set about 30 years ago before the Playable Guardian we play in the Original Destiny Video game. It about our main character Felax Starborn, an Aussie Hunter Guardian whose been chosen by the Traveler and to protect humanity but having a lot of trouble of being one. Ever since he been risen, a cloud of bad luck has been hanging over him and causing trouble wherever Felax goes and bring pain to him. Other people, including looked at him either a weirdo or just a loser who shouldn’t been a guardian in the first place. But Felax never give up on trying to prove them all wrong and he do it without anyone (apart from Arc) working with him. To achieve his goal, he would have to do dangerous or any payable job he can get his respect and with his ghost Arc by his side, he believes he can do it.

Note: There will be parts that won’t make since yet until we progress with this story.

That’s all I wanted to say, until next time……peace out mates.

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